When comparing my roughcut to the national standards I believe it's around the 33/60 mark:
I think this because after comparing this work to my work we both have roughly the same layout as in we have lots of empty space. Also, comparing this contents page to mine they're both boring and sparse so more colour needed. To improve my work I will need to add more sell lines to the front page. In the contents I need to add more colours from the house style and create more article heading to take up space. Lastly, to improve my double page spread again make the page look less sparse so more images and text needs to be added to the page.
Overall I think I'm in band 2 because at the moment I think my magazine shows a basic ability in creativity and my ideas have not fully developed so not showing a excellence in creativity to get me in band 4.
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